argument作文（Argument作文翻译过来叫什么）
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求大神指导一下GRE作文Argument部分该如何去写？
对于已经上过课或者自己复习GRE写作一段时间的同学来讲，大家肯定知道Argument就是要求我们做“杠精”，找出文章中作者重大的逻辑失误。
但是我们刚知道这个，是远远不够的。精准的找到逻辑错误，只是我们万里长征的第一步。
对于想要追求高分的同学来讲，通过我们缜密的分析来搭建完整的逻辑闭环是至关重要的。
现在，我们通过同学们的习作来引导大家不断的完善我们的攻击细节（所有段落都来自同学们全文批改的节选）。
# 节选一 #
To begin with, we should doubt the casual relation between the dramatically increased popularity of skateboarding users and the decrease in stores’ business established by the author. First of all, the stores might have many internal problems. They cannot offer a wider variety of goods and higher quality services to meet the needs of customers. Second, shops in Central Plaza might have fierce competition with nearby stores. Customers may prefer other stores so that the Central plaza might have decreased in business. Therefore, it is unconvincing that the decrease in their business is due to skateboarders.
这位同学的作文，整体结构已经搭建的非常好啦。
但是，在细节处理上，我们可以做的更好。比如这句话：First of all, the stores might have many internal problems. They cannot offer a wider variety of goods and higher quality services to meet the needs of customers.
单看这句话是没什么问题的，但是仔细一分析，会发现：原来Central Plaza是很受欢迎的，只是现在不好了。但是如果只写服务不好，产品多样性不高就会不合理，因为毕竟曾经这家shopping mall很受欢迎，所以它曾经的服务和产品应该是没问题的。因而我们就需要解释为什么商场会越做越差。
所以我们改成了：First of all, the out-of-date internal management could impede stores in Central Plaza from improving their service and products since it was immersed in its past glory time. Therefore, those disappointed customers could choose other nearby shopping malls, instead of Central Plaza.
这样改成之后，我们就可以看出来为什么现在差了呢？因为他们沉迷于以前的成功，不思进取啦。这样我们就把商场现在服务不好这件事情解释清楚了。
这个就叫逻辑闭环。如果大家在考试中可以注意到这样的逻辑闭环，并把它解释清楚，不仅仅会收获更多的字数，也会拿到更高的分数。
# 节选二 #
Moreover, there is a threshold problem involves the content of no Palean boats have been found in the river. The author regards no Palean boats have been found as the same as there were not any boats here before. However, from any aspects, no Palean boats have been discovered in the river and there were totally not any boats here in the past are wholly different. First of all, the row material of boats that Palean used could be wood they cut from tree which could be eroded and vanished as time went by. Besides, it’s likely that there were boats from Litho instead, passing the river and trading goods with Palean. In short, without ruling out those mentioned discrepancies, it is impossible to conclude no found Palean boats is equal to not any boats were once here.
这篇练习来自A166，这道题目本身难度较高，所以是我们直播二里重点讲解的题目。整体来看，这名同学做的很不错，但在细节上还需要进一步打磨。
比如这句：
First of all, the row material of boats that Palean used could be wood they cut from tree which could be eroded and vanished as time went by.
这句可以通过添加更多的细节让我们的论述更加完整。
首先，为什么船只能是木头做的呢？因为当时技术不够先进，没有别的办法。而木头又容易被微生物降解，所以现在就找不到了。
改完这句话就可以写成：
First of all, in the ancient time, people did not have highly developed technology and only used wood to make boats, which was easily decomposed by microorganism. 都是一句话，但是第二句表达更具有细节，解释的更到位。这个就叫逻辑闭环。
不管是Argument，还是Issue，我们都是采用五段式，除去开头段和结尾段，中间三个中心段落是我们得分的核心。
对于Argument来讲，多样的攻击细节和扎实的逻辑解释可以让我们对作者的攻击看起来更加合理，因而可以为我们赢得更多的分数。
在这个过程中，语言水平的高低并不会带来本质的影响（当然我们要尽可能的减少语法错误并保证表意清晰，只是可以不使用相对比较复杂的句子而已）。
ARGUMENT作文怎么写才能拿高分
想写好作文，在我看来，无非有以下几点：
1.严谨的布局：
正所谓万事开头难，不过只要开了个好头，这篇作文就会很好写了。
凤头：是文章的首段，是阅卷老师首先入眼的地方，一定要做好整篇文章的中心把握，要做到下文与首段上下连贯，紧密结合，要通过开头使下文有可写之处，开头要达到让阅卷老师耳目一新的效果。例如，巧用排比，比喻，拟人等修辞手法，并且通过这些修辞手法，而统领全文主旨。
猪肚：在一篇上好的文章中，分段都会恰到好处，而当文章中只有一大段或两三段时，这篇文章即使文采再出众，也不会有太高的分数，因为阅卷老师在中考判卷时，每三分钟就要判出一份作文，工作量相当大，如果不善于分段，阅卷老师可能失去耐心，从而看不完，就会草草的给出分数。所以，在我看来，一篇文章至少要分 6-8个段，但不是一行或几行一段，而是要看起来像豆腐块，一块块整齐的排列在一起，使文章紧中有松，松弛有度。要看上去整篇文章是一个整体，而不是零散的。2014中考作文写作技巧及方法
豹尾：在文章的最后处，应当让主题更突出鲜明，升华主题思想，使豹尾抽起来!或让人感到峰回路转，柳暗花明或更进一步的特殊效果。在文章末尾，应当再次点题，紧扣中心思想，让贯穿始终的中心思想继续延伸，引人深思。特别是要在结尾处，与开头形成呼应，对比，递进等等，来引发阅读老师的共鸣!
2.细腻的文笔：不管是记叙，议论还是散文;不管是写人写事还是写景。都要用细腻的文笔呈现出来，使文章中点更突出，让阅卷老师在看试卷的过程中，有深思，放慢阅读速度和重复阅读的情况出现，让阅卷老师身临其境，从而使文章更具灵性。
3.贯穿始终的思想感情：在一篇布局格式上很得当，错落有致的文章上，还必须要有一条贯穿始终的思想路线，这条线就像鱼的脊椎一样重要，这条线一定要清晰，明确，千万不可含混不清。
把握好这几点，一篇好的中考作文已经大致成型，不过要想在中考中脱颖而出，这仅仅是开始。
小学英语作文：a big argument
I had an argument with my good friend.
I had a big argument with my good friend yesterday because of the baseball teams.
Then he still didn't talk to me during the next break time.
In the end,while I was watching TV the phone ring.
Peter的文章
I had a big argument with my good friend yesterday because of the baseball teams.During the break time,we argument about which team is the best in the league big.I thought it is yangqi and he thought it is redsocks.After the argument,he went of to say goodbye to me and close the door loudly.I was so angry with him.
Then he still didn't talk to me during the next break time.He didn't even look at me.I started to feel sad because he is my best friend.When it was time to go home I asked him if he wanted to go with me as usual.He looked at me with a strange look and still turned away.But this time,he did say goodbye to me quietly.
In the end,while I was watching TV the phone ring.It was him and he said he was sorry about what he did,he felt childish.I said never mind we are still good friends.Now I feel much better I hope we won't argument any more.
